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Dear Anjela,

thank you for your submission, here comes your feedback:General Comment:Please check the comments in the text.

The case study is a scientific document. This means that every statement written in this work- which is not considered general knowledge - must be backed up by corresponding statements in a scientific source, like a scientific paper or book.This source must be listed in the bibliography of the case study, and it must be referenced directly in the text behind the corresponding statement, to make clear, in which part of the text the used information is and where it was taken from. To reference the source in the text, use the following format: (<author's last name(s)><year of the publication>). Do not use the complete literature source for referencing directly in the text.

You did not reference one statement in the text. This does not comply with the rules of scientific writing and does not comply with the rules of IU and is therefore fined with a reduction of the given credits by 30%!

Definition of the problem:The outline of the case study was given. The task was mostly understood and identified.Approach/Methods of implementation:You are required to structure the text in at least an introduction a main part and a conclusion. This does not mean, that you write "body" or "main" in the title of the main part. Instead, you write at the headings of one or more sections a content-dependent title and various subtitles.

The text was often verbose. The approach taken was methodical but is in parts not really comprehensible and the followed logic is not always clear.

The approach was also superficial and did not take the effort to really engage in depth with the topic.

It is bad style to mix the evaluation with the conclusion. It would have been better to separate the two topics.Quality of implementation:All in the text referenced scientific sources must be in the bibliography at the end of the text and vice versa.

The page number of the information in the source which is referenced must be given, because it is not acceptable for the readers to search through a complete book to find the information which is refererenced.

If you make a statement or give a definition, you need to back them up with scientific literature directly after the statement. Do not wait until the bottom of the passage.

The content given in some sentences is not correct. Please see the comments for further details.

The number of sources given in the bibliography listed is too small in correspondence to the number of pages. There is a thumb-rule, that a researcher needs to have at least 1-2 referenced sources per page. So, this leads students with a minimum of 14 to 20 referenced literature sources.

The expectation was, that the created evaluation criteria are used to scientifically derive the best model for BioFood. Unfortunately,

this was not the case.Scope and completeness of the result:

The literature work was not convincingly covered.

The content scope was partially covered.

The conclusion covered the summary. No insights, conclusions and recommenations were given. When writing a conclusion, you shortly summarize the approach and the insights of the case study. Then you draw the conclusions for the result of the work and give recommendations for other future works.

The required task was to find the best project process model for BioFood. Unfortunately, this was not fulfilled.Compliance with formal requirements:The references must be listed in a homogenous style and follow a certain and consistent standardized structure, i.e. the APA standard. For further instruction, check out the guidelines for citations in the following folder:https://iubhfs.sharepoint.com/:f:/r/sites/BusinessIntelligenceI_DLMDSEBA01_CF/Shared%20Documents/General/Course_Materials?csf=1&web=1&e=ZNubLNThe bibliographyshould be sorted, either by date or by the last name of the first author.

The referencing of sources must be compliant to the rules in the citation guideline.

According to the guidelines of case studies, you are requested to number the single sections - up to a maximum of 3 levels.

You are supposed to use 1,5 line spacing. The pages must be numbered on the center of the bottom line of the page. Please check the guidelines for the case studies.Correctness of Spelling and punctuation:There were a few issues with spelling. There were a few issues with punctation. Linguistic expression:This is a scientific work, so you cannot use words like "I", "you", "our", etc.

Sometimes words are missing in the sentences.

The sentence structure of several sentences was not correct.

When you use abbreviations, then you must introduce the complete term the first time you use an abbreviation and directly after the term used.

You should try to write in a more concise way, down-to-the point! Try to be as precise and short as possible!

Scientific writing: Neutral language was used.

Language of an AI large language model used.

Flowery and philosophical style of writing. Since this is a scientific document, it would be better to be concise, precise and use a neutral language